Masanao made this:
and this:
for a paper I’m involved in. Unfortunately, neither one is going in the paper. In any case, I prefer the one with the dots.
I would only make a few little changes, mostly to make everything smaller (while keeping fonts readable), pulling the lines closer together and also writing the leftmost labels on two lines so they’ll fit.
It's a nice bit of work. I seem to have stopped doing anything in pure black-and-white line and stipple graphics. The laziness of always having colour laser printers available; or greyscale at the very least, which is not the same set of restrictions.
I think the dotplots look nicer, but I have to admit that I find it much easier to compare effects across columns in the barplot (I think because it includes more of a visual clue to where the lower bound of zero is for each row, rather than having to rely on distance from the 50% line to make comparisons).